Every girl I ever knew
reminds
of every girl I ever knew.
Same soft
Same light
Same waiting every night
Same body
soul
Same end
hole
and
Every man
dancing eyes
little boy sighs
just one of the guys
stroking the same
totem’s pole.
Wow, this is beautiful and yet so simple. Your work is amazing, and I have only read 4 poems!
Comment by amanahill — February 1, 2009 @ 9:35 pm |
I have another version of this poem that is on the way. But this first incarnation seemed to grow by itself and of course I am happy it worked.
Comment by rhbee — February 2, 2009 @ 5:22 am |